The Printed Fox: Devil's Bitch Excerpt

Tuesday, April 16, 2013

Devil's Bitch Excerpt

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For this week's hook, for a change of pace I'm featuring Devil's Bitch, which will be my next release. Reoth, Imperial Champion and for all intents and purposes Norelia's betrothed, storms past the guards who had been keeping him out of her command tent.

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He whipped aside the tent flaps and immediately wished the guards had followed orders.

Norelia stood with her hands on Baruk's chest, engulfed in his beef slab arms. Hands like ham hocks squashed her against his freakishly wide chest. While his topknot hid their faces from Reoth's view, there could be no doubt.

They were kissing.


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Kathleen Grieve's avatar

Kathleen Grieve · 624 weeks ago

Uh oh....sounds like that isn't a good thing. But why?? Good hook!
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Lacie Nation · 624 weeks ago

OHHH...he doesn't seem to like that. What is going on?! great hook.
Oh no! Wonder if there's more to the story. Great hook!
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That last line made go 'huh? It sounded negative, and then--they're kissing? I want to know more
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lol When from the POV of the suddenly-jealous hero, anything about the rival love interest is described with the worst spin possible. =D
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Oh wow, she's caught! What will happen next??!
That's a great hook! Who shouldn't be where he or she is at that moment?!
Oh no! Can't wait to see how Reoth reacts!
Great hook :)
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