The Printed Fox: Duchess of War Excerpt

Tuesday, February 12, 2013

Duchess of War Excerpt

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For this week's hook, I'm once again featuring my WIP, Duchess of War. Anya is getting to know her new maids, who also had served the former Duchess of Eodel.

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Amélie shook her head. "That's the strange thing about it. The late Duchess was an excellent swimmer, and she visited the seaside in Tynes all the time." Her voice grew bitter. "The Duke and Lord Tynes are practically brothers."

"Hush, Amie. Tynes couldn't have done anything." Margaud shifted on the bed, not wanting to jostle Anya.

Amélie jumped up from her place on the floor and folded her arms as she glared out the window. "Well, someone did."

"I don't understand." Anya's voice caught in her throat. She swallowed hard and realized she did understand and just didn't want to.

Amélie looked over her shoulder at Anya, pain and loss etched in her face even after all these years later. "We think she was murdered."

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Hmm... sounds as if Anya is going to have a difficult time with it.
Great hook, thanks for sharing!
Oh, that's an excellent hook! :)
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Such passion in this hook. I want to read more
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Sarah Cass · 633 weeks ago

Hmmm...leading right in with the intrigue. Was it murder and who-done-it? Good hook!
A wonderful hook. I want to know more.
That last line has definitely hooked me! :)
Great hook...I want to know more!
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Lacie Nation · 633 weeks ago

Great hook! love the mystery.
Who wouldn't want to know the solution to a murder? Great hook.
Great hook, well done!
Whoa - what a hook, great place to end it!
Excellent! I love a murder mystery.
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J S Morbius · 633 weeks ago

Great hook left me wanting more
This makes me want to know more. I like your description, the interactions among them, and the feeling of the piece.
Ooooh! Great hook!

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